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diff --git a/tools-reference/echo/text.xml b/tools-reference/echo/text.xml
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--- a/tools-reference/echo/text.xml
+++ b/tools-reference/echo/text.xml
@@ -29,12 +29,12 @@ the same as the former, but they won't print the trailing newline
<p>
All usage of the form <c>echo ${somevar} | grep substring</c> just to
-check if the contents of the <c>${somevar}</c> variable
-contains <c>substring</c>, or more often, <c>echo ${somevar} |
-command</c>, are deprecated and should be (and in most cases, can be)
-used as less as possible: doing so involves for no reason an
-additional shell session and a pipe. The "here strings" section
-describes the preferred way of dealing with such cases.
+check if the content of the <c>${somevar}</c> variable contains
+<c>substring</c>, or more often, <c>echo ${somevar} | command</c>,
+is deprecated and should be (and in most cases, can be) avoided:
+doing so involves for no reason an additional shell session and a pipe.
+The "here strings" section describes the preferred way
+of dealing with such cases.
</p>
</body>
</section>
@@ -43,11 +43,10 @@ describes the preferred way of dealing with such cases.
<title>Here strings</title>
<body>
<p>
-As of &gt;=bash-2.05b, the so-called "here strings" have been
-introduced. Using "here strings", you can pass contents of an
+Using "here strings", you can pass contents of an
environment variable to the standard input of an application, using
<c>&lt;&lt;&lt;word</c> redirection: what actually happens is
-that <c>bash</c> expands word and passes the result to the standard
+that <c>bash</c> expands <c>word</c> and passes the result to the standard
input.
</p>